ARTICLE REVIEW...!!!??

Think...Think..Think...do you know what is article review? actually to be honest i never heard about article review before this.Very sad right the basic things about learning english i dont know. Ok for those who dont know i will share this information that i have learn in tech com class with you..

Paraphrase : is a summary, written in your own words, briefly restates the writer's main points. Paraphrase, although written in your own words, is used to relate the details or the progression of an idea in your source. Quotation, used sparingly, can lend credibility to your work or capture a memorable passage.

method to paraphrase

1. Read fast and re-read ( Purposeful )
2. Circle or highlight the important keyword/keypoint.
3. Find replacement for the word
4. Restructure, re-arrange sequences of point
5. Double check the accuracy again according to the original text.

the example of Paraphrase

    " Of the more than 1000 bicycling deaths each year, three-fourth are caused by head injuries. Half of those killed are school-age children. One study concluded that wearing a bike helmet absorbs the shock and cushions the head."

           

No	Original	Paraphrase
1	Of more than 1000 bicycling death fourth caused by head injuries	bicycling fatalitier 75%
2	Half are school age children	50% are school children
3	Wearing helmet can reduce head injuries by 85%	minimize/to decrease the accident
4	Helmet absorbs shock and cautions the head	protect impact/force

Other than that we also learn about Timbuktu history. Miss show us some video of Timbuktu then after finish reviewing the video we need to list the main idea and supporting detail about Timbuktu that we understand from the video that we watch. Here i also attach paraphrase that we do about Timbuktu

Main Idea  

• universal learning centre that have monument effect UNESCO                                                               

Supporting Detail 1

•  they have learning center                                                                                                                    
  

Supporting Detail 2 

• belong to whole heritage world                                                                                                             

Supporting Detail 3

• a small and poor town that located far away in the middle of savana grassland.                            

In this topic i have learn how to make the some article or stories more easier for reader to understand some word that to complicated.other than that its also make me more creative to manipulate the word without change the meaning of the article. 

by: muniey